 JaccoGardner
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Date: October 28, 2005 @ 7:29 AM
nice! I like the chorus a lot, very cool airy sound  I like it! great job on this! 
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 GeneHilbert
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Date: October 28, 2005 @ 10:45 AM
Nice intro..... Music is kewl...... but vocally diction suffers I can't understand what the lyrics are saying. I get the chorus - but that's it. You are singing really softly, plus they are buried in the mix.
This is very common with self produced projects - not being use to hearing or not liking one's own vocals. I would remix this – making vocals the priority. If you have pitch problems - punch in and fix them.
Sounds like a kewl tune, hence worth the effort.
Kewl Tune
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 strum
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Date: October 28, 2005 @ 1:36 PM
nice effects used
just the right amount of rise for the chorus
2:53 onwards, really nice
really nice ideas here... nice use of the synth and all
nice presentation
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blueyes2112
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Date: October 28, 2005 @ 3:43 PM
Very nice indeed, loving the whole feel to this track! its almost like a george michael track from a few years back, but nmore wholesome and full!! And obviously a lot better!! very nice indeed
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spencm
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Date: October 28, 2005 @ 7:34 PM
Great Job the whole production is very professional great guitar work like the use of whammy bar or wha. keyboard work is excellent. Lead vocal would work as female also.
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 tsand19151
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Date: October 28, 2005 @ 8:12 PM
agree with Gene on the mix. that being said..the potential here is great. nice arrangement as well. liking the guitar sounds. kool drum and bass parts too. nice job.......
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evansorchid
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Date: October 29, 2005 @ 6:34 AM
A very tight production. I really like the instrumentation throughout the entire song. The song reminds me a bit of the Stone Roses. This absolutely has a ton of potential. Keep it up guys. And thanks for letting me know about this.
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independentm...
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Date: October 29, 2005 @ 11:02 AM
As for me, I hear things just fine. Don't be offended by Gene's honestly stated opinion. (but DO pay heed, because he IS very trusted and admired 'round here for his skill and pro ability ...and he has the best of intentions.)
...but that being said, it is YOUR tune and if it sounds fine to YOU, then that's all that matters.
I give it even "as-is"
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independentm...
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Date: October 29, 2005 @ 11:05 AM
aw fibbledy bibble...
scratch everything I just said. (You know all that already.)
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soundsseeker
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Date: October 29, 2005 @ 1:27 PM
Nice..very nice... love the initial lead in.. Great lyrics..and flow.. 
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B1GMAC
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Date: October 30, 2005 @ 5:01 AM
Thanks Mike (Indep....)I know exactly what you mean. But Gene is absolutely right, in fact creepily spot on! I can't wait to find a vocalist to try doing the songs some justice. (Then pump those vocals up).
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dennytate
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Date: October 30, 2005 @ 10:13 PM
I like the introduction a lot.
Nice guitar work & effects.
The vocals sound nice & the blending of the harmony takes the listener in.
I like these lyrics a lot.
I can hear this one on a soundtrack to
a nice film...has a indie film feeling.
I said it before & I'll say it again..
Waiting For Dennis is back !  
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 Vickxxx
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Date: October 31, 2005 @ 11:01 PM
This is a cool arrangment...especially that segue between chorus and verse...that is sooo smooooth.
The guitars and orchestration are sounding cool and the rhythm section is poppin. The delivery of the vox may not have been what you expected, but the vocal melodies and ideas have got nice hooks to them.
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furiousBall
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Date: November 1, 2005 @ 12:09 AM
vocals are buried as mentioned. i also heard some clips in that wah guitar too. all that said...this is a cool song and well put together. nice job
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zique
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Date: November 4, 2005 @ 6:41 AM
I really dig the arrangement.Like the timing and the way the synchopated drums match up with the rhythm guitar.Killer chorus.I dig this.nice work.
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MonnieB
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Date: November 6, 2005 @ 6:04 AM
Daaayum... Nice track, sensual backing track and delicious vocals... You've done it again, my man... I see this as a night track in a fast car, going around the city, taking in the neon lights... This is nice...
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idealist
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Date: November 7, 2005 @ 4:59 PM
very cool and full of great little sounds that make a really nice whole... if that makes sense? it seems to to me! anyway, great track. loved every minute! cool lyrics in the chorus but the verse needs the volume up slightly.
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 1dangerouslao
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Date: November 24, 2005 @ 12:53 AM
this song sounds like a porno song lol Yeah im likin dis track and check out my new hit "Ktown Anthem"my new hit "Ktown Anthem"
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1dangerouslao
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Date: November 24, 2005 @ 12:54 AM
my bad i said it twice
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Rodrica
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Date: November 28, 2005 @ 5:44 AM
Love the melody...I like the subtle vocals, all they need is to be turned up a notch to make them a little louder. I don't believe the song would work as well with powerful vocals...it would lose the emotion and atmospheric "feel" you have created here. The way the chorus kicks in and lifts the song is great. I like the arrangement and the blend of sounds. Great song!
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zedsalt
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Date: December 19, 2005 @ 3:38 PM
I love the marriage of the stuttering rhythm with the almost spooky vocal and thin, brittle guitar. Beautiful. "Take off your shoes and learn to fly"- that's a great line. The dramatic dynamics and sound foleyish vocals add a lot of depth to this. It's kind of Pop-py, but cuts a little deeper, ala XTC or Bauhaus. Niiiiice.
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ebarbarella
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Date: January 26, 2006 @ 11:53 AM
 love it  as always amazing! playlisted for Vocal Pop Show
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